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Friday, July 5, 2019
Elevator Pitch 2
For this time around, I tried to smoothen out the details and ensure that I focused less on the product and more on the emotion and need for the product. Since people can learn more about it through the website, this will ensure they feel compelled to do so.
I like your attention grabber and the way you transitioned into describing your service. The concept you came up with and how it ties into environmental sustainability and access to resources is also impressive. I think you have really made yourself more relaxed and emotional this time around, bit you still seem a little nervous (which I totally understand) and it is clear that you have a good understanding of the service you want to provide to your target audience. Good job!
I like your attention grabber and the way you transitioned into describing your service. The concept you came up with and how it ties into environmental sustainability and access to resources is also impressive. I think you have really made yourself more relaxed and emotional this time around, bit you still seem a little nervous (which I totally understand) and it is clear that you have a good understanding of the service you want to provide to your target audience. Good job!
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